Johnathan Hales and His Role Saving the Script of Attack of the Clones
Keen eyes may have noticed the name Jonathan Hales as being credited as a scriptwriter on prequel film Attack of the Clones.
While the story was Lucasâ€™, Hales was called in to help with the third draft as time was up â€“ filming was due to start and the script was not yet finished â€“ what a mess!
Hales was tasked with saving the film.
When it was a live site, Secret History of Star Wars noted that Lucasâ€™s first â€œrough draft – not yet even a proper first draft-was completed in March of 2000 and it was typed up as he was boarding the plane to leave for the studio since the production would begin in June.â€
He was a writer for Lucasâ€™s Adventures of Young Indiana Jones and clearly had the trust of Lucas to get the scripting job done.
Production was well advanced and it was in a position that producer Rick McCallum described to as like trying to build a skyscraper without a foundation. Ultimately the final production script was only able to be read by the actors three days before filming!
So what contribution did Hales make?
The Secret History of Star Wars (now a defunct website) surmised that given Lucas also re-wrote Hales' last polish, his contribution to the script was â€œtenuousâ€.
This may not be a fair assessment as Hales did receive a full screenwriter's credit and under the Writers Guild of America screenwriting credit system, a screenwriter must contribute more than 50 percent of an original screenplay or 33 percent of an adaptation to receive credit.
Despite the suggestion of Haleâ€™s work being mere polish (well, if thatâ€™s the case, how did he not pick up on the Anakin's sand quote business? Or did he write that line into the script himself?) Lucas must have been happy enough with his contribution to the script as Hales continued to do a fair bit of writing of the Adventures of Young Indiana Jones series.
All this aside, Lucas gave Leigh Brackett a credit for The Empire Strikes Back, despite evidence from Lawrence Kasdan suggesting her work did not contribute materially to the final version of the film.
As an aside, some famous film re-writes or script doctoring moments have gone uncredited including Star War's very own Carrie Fisher as a script doctor for Hook, Sister Act, Lethal Weapon 3 but even Fisher couldn't save Last Action Hero.
In such circumstances, script doctors often deliberately go uncredited, even when they do major work.
But what is this business referred to as script doctoring and why is this discussion suddenly taken place?
To answer the latter, it's an interesting tangent and it gives a good reason to talk more about Star Wars. The first part of the question refers to a scriptwriter taking an existing script and giving it ‘another go' with a major restructure or simply tidying up some pacing issues, improving dialogue, fixing scene that wasn't quite working or coming up with a more suitable ending.
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Did you ever hear of a scriptwriter called Tom Stoppard?
Tom Stoppard also has a massive connection to George Lucas which fans will be amused to consider.
George Lucas once asked Stoppard to do a re-write of Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade – he did the final version of the film but is uncredited – screen writing credit for the film is shared between 5 people but not Stoppard.
Now if we go cast back to Revenge of the Sith, the film turned out a lot different to what was original script – and we're referring to the fall of Anakin Skywalker to the dark side of the Force here. As the film was pieced together Lucas felt Anakin's turn was too abrupt and not logical.
Lucas did two sets of extra pick up filming to ensure his new story line of Anakin turning to the dark side of the Force was in response to his need to save Padme's life.
So who helped Lucas get this very late piece of story incorporated into Sith?
It must have been Stoppard who is credited as being the uncredited scriptwriter that saved the film.
This was a secret let out of the bag by Hayden Christiansen in an interview with Playboy.
So there we have it.
A small insight into Hale's work on Attack of the Clones leads us to learn that Carrie Fisher is an actual script doctor herself and that one of the most famous scriptwriters in history, Tom Stoppard helped Lucas with Revenge of the Sith. The connection there is because Stoppard worked a turn on Indiana Jones and The Last Crusade.
The story of how Leigh Brackett wrote the first draft of the Empire Strikes Back is a great tale.
We wonder what is the best ph meter for brewing that Darth Vader ever used?
Paul Rose Jr has worked as TV News Producer, Forensic Analyst, and Train Conductor, among many other things. He’s the former TV Editor for Infuzemag.com and owns more books, DVDs, and comics than most people have seen in their lifetimes. When he’s not writing articles, he exercises his creative muscle writing screenplays and acting in film and television in Los Angeles, CA.